Angel

Lately I have developed interest in scripting poetry,and as a beginning exercise I have come up with a awkwardly silly poem.I request you all to please comment on this.It values a lot to a poet in the making.

This is supposed to be funny poem not sure how good this stands to be.

God is such an artist,he has the taste.
I say this because he made u out of things,that are the best.
Those dreamy eyes.
Those blushing cheeks.
Those tender ears and rosy lips.
U look as beautiful as Christmas cake.
God also gave you a mouth,his one big mistake.

one of the best i have come across

A hundred days have made me older
Since the last time that I saw your pretty face
A thousand lies have made me colder
And I don't think I can look at this the same

All the miles that separate
Disappear now when I'm dreamin' of your face
I'm here without you baby
But you're still on my lonely mind

I think about you baby and I dream about you all the time
I'm here without you baby
But you're still with me in my dreams
And tonight, there's only you and me.

The miles just keep rollin'
As the people leave their way to say hello
I've heard this life is overrated
But I hope that it gets better as we go.

I'm here without you baby
But you're still on my lonely mind
I think about you baby and I dream about you all the time

I'm here without you baby
But you're still with me in my dreams
And tonight girl, there's only you and me.

Everything I know, and anywhere I go
It gets hard but it won't take away my love
And when the last one falls, when it's all said and done.
It gets hard but it won't take away my love

I'm here without you baby
But you're still on my lonely mind
I think about you baby and I dream about you all the time

I'm here without you baby
But you're still with me in my dreams
And tonight girl, there's only you and me